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Unveiled (Free verse) by aperfecttool77

I wake every morning living a lie All thoughts and dreams about you by my side My mind is conquered and ravaged by thoughts of something I might never have -And you know this too. I hide the truth behind this veil of tranquility everyone witnesses Only adding to my sorrow -And you know this too. So much I want to say to you, but I lack the words to say it You leave me breathless I???d give it all for one taste of the life I may never live -And you know this too. What about what I want to know? Do you still feel like you once did? Will there ever be a you and me? -And you know this too. I will love you forever and always But never can I tell you this Because I don???t want you to experience this hell that I do. -This, you may never know.

OneFingerAnswer 24-Sep-02/9:18 AM
god'swife your welcome and I thank you too. As for the bees, now that I know their source they make perfect sense and I thought discussion of them was as dead as they are. Back to people being able to call art/poetry good or bad, An individual can say that a piece of work is bad in their eyes but they cannot tell me how it looks through my eyes.

If many people like it then maybe the artist/poet did something right or maybe they just played puppet to the audience and wrote something simple for the simple minds. If no one likes it maybe they simply need to die before any credit can be given for their greatness or maybe they just suck. Either way the former will get money and fame (or maybe just a bunch of 10's) and the latter will starve or find a day job. The audiance maybe right or wrong but in the end they are still the jury.




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