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Unveiled (Free verse) by aperfecttool77

I wake every morning living a lie All thoughts and dreams about you by my side My mind is conquered and ravaged by thoughts of something I might never have -And you know this too. I hide the truth behind this veil of tranquility everyone witnesses Only adding to my sorrow -And you know this too. So much I want to say to you, but I lack the words to say it You leave me breathless I???d give it all for one taste of the life I may never live -And you know this too. What about what I want to know? Do you still feel like you once did? Will there ever be a you and me? -And you know this too. I will love you forever and always But never can I tell you this Because I don???t want you to experience this hell that I do. -This, you may never know.

OneFingerAnswer 24-Sep-02/12:19 AM
Expression in this format is poetry though. A wall well painted is not art but there has been an artist who painted black squares on a black canvas and it recieved acclaim as a great piece of art. I found it to be bad but I couldn't deny that it was art.




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