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Married (Free verse) by INTRANSIT

Do not build your spouse, for they came to you already assembled. Instead tether them, and fly them like a kite.

INTRANSIT 23-Sep-02/9:24 PM
OK I think you hit the mark. Maybe I should have said "tether with love". Yes? No? Throw it out the dou?




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