Replying to a comment on:

Married (Free verse) by INTRANSIT

Do not build your spouse, for they came to you already assembled. Instead tether them, and fly them like a kite.

INTRANSIT 23-Sep-02/8:44 PM
OUCH! I thought it had plenty of depth. Was I too vague maybe?
'Course I can't please every one. Thanks for the input:)




Track and Plan your submissions ; Read some Comics ; Get Paid for your Poetry
PoemRanker Copyright © 2001 - 2024 - kaolin fire - All Rights Reserved
All poems Copyright © their respective authors
An internet tradition since June 9, 2001