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A Moment (Haiku) by nentwined

With these lines I do entwine you, your mind, a moment in time: velvet wine.

-=SeTTle=- 11-May-02/9:29 PM
For some reason this poem seemed really...fast..not short so much but...it flowed fast....not well, not badly either, but it seemed really decisive, almost curt.




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