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Wedding Day... (Free verse) by loneshadow29

Long since remembered Of the day she said "I do" The look of her face Happiness aglow, tears of joy Welling up from within Holding her love in her arms Truly a priceless vision for all to see I stood alone, a smile upon my face Watching as they danced so slowly Knowing deep within my very soul That the wonderful angel Whom I call my friend And the loving man She now calls husband that they shall live in happiness basking in the warmth of their love before returning to the shadows I say my goodbye With an gentle embrace Then a hardy handshake I soon disappear from sight as I trek down the drive I softly begin to sing hearing the words in my mind "one boy, one girl two hearts beating wildly to put it mildly it was love at first sight" truly a gift from above for love found two angels and gave them wings to fly as they have become one bound by love and happiness feeling heaven in their arms

horus8 20-Sep-02/12:02 AM
but what?...you wanted him to give you the old ins and outs instead of her huh?...aye..my love! that's it precisely one boy one girl and a scorned one living in denial.. pray for forgiveness your mind is unclean.




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