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Game Over (Free verse) by nentwined

If you do everything correctly everything just so you will die. Context determines when a twist of the pliers is torture, metaphor or hyperbole. Blood in your mouth a reminder of life and death A piece of you torn away and stitched together. Same as every moment any moment constantly reborn.

Dovina 11-Mar-21/12:21 PM
Dismal take on life. Everything ends in death. btw, a twist of the pliers fixed me faucet, and a piece of me torn away saved my life. I too have looked at it both ways.




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