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Fueled hearts (Free verse) by INTRANSIT

May I make love with you? Let's ride the black sheets passionately, and race those who challenge us! We will cruise our love endlessly, sharing the enjoyment of those cruising with us. Let us pause from time to time, and fill ourselves, so that we may continue our journey together with full feeling. Don't burden about crashing, and we will have the time of our lives. We will watch our speed and I will never leave you behind.

Jill Stockinger 1-Jan-21/12:00 PM
Sheets as a stand-in for streets did not work well for me--
Liked much of this!"Don't burden about crashing; burden doesn't fit well there- just use "worry" or some similar word, I would recommend. cute metaphor.




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