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Vulgar peoples (Free verse) by INTRANSIT

The Phoenix rises as does the Columbia. Maybe, when ties are stored and vestments put away and blades browned and barrels rotted and history forgotten and lips have closed and tongues intertwine, then, maybe, peace. But there will always be ashes and embers.

Jill Stockinger 1-Jan-21/11:45 AM
Yes, we send rocketships up into space...
I don't see the connection between "vulgar peoples, rocketships, the passage of time, and with people gone, peace--leaving ashes and embers.
I think it would help to make the connection more clear. Just because we send up rocketships we are vulgar? too unclear for me.




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