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The lightest touch (Free verse) by INTRANSIT

Wispy swirling white. Flashing ruby fright. Spinning, sliding away as additions enter the fray. Many pass in the night wispy and swirling white.

Jill Stockinger 1-Jan-21/11:40 AM
Could not picture what was flashing ruby fright. A cop car?
Not clear enough to me, some nice imagery there.




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