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The lightest touch
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Wispy swirling white. Flashing ruby fright. Spinning, sliding away as additions enter the fray. Many pass in the night wispy and swirling white.
Jill Stockinger
1-Jan-21/11:40 AM
Could not picture what was flashing ruby fright. A cop car?
Not clear enough to me, some nice imagery there.
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