poemranker ::Replying

ReplyTo a comment on for John by pete.

nentwined3 Dec 2020

I kind of want to hear this out loud, ranted on stage, maybe with some jazz behind it. I don't know how well it holds up for me for re-reading, I don't feel like it "wraps up" for me? but maybe it doesn't need to. I really want it to wrap up more, though.