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alcohol is home. (Free verse) by SupremeDreamer

I find magic in madness. Chaos is where we all began. Darkness is a realm of all possibilities, much similar to madness. Drunkenness is a state that frees us from ourselves... That is why I usually reside there. Judgement is suspended, and that calms me. I feel at home then. Is that not home? The place you can be yourself? That space where you unwind... A realm where you can simply be?

-=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. 19-Jun-18/4:55 PM
A profoundly silly piece. I can't be bothered to dig up the original Checkliste, but this bulgingly stupid offering certainly ticks a few dunce-boxes:

[X] Arbitrary line breaks
[X] Clerical errors
[X] Cliched imagery (gazing out of window, pits of despair)
[X] 'Depression' words (putrid, wretched, darkness)
[X] Devoid of alliteration or any such linguistic embellishments
[X] Devoid of rhyme
[X] Devoid of simile, reification or any such literary devices
[X] Devoid of wondrous or fantastical imagery
[X] Drug reference
[X] Melodramatic
[X] Overabundance of ellipses
[X] Pointedly unanswered questions
[X] Self-obsessed

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