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SUCH IS THE LOSS I FEEL (Free verse) by ARTIE

Sometimes it is slow other times it seems painful. But I now know from within the depths of my heart I was prepared to believe in you I believed you would be there... forever. I believed that you were different, that you could be the one to have heard such a beautiful song. T’was the song from my heart and why I felt broken when at the loss of your touch your innermost thoughts the light in your eyes and your everlasting smile. I feel [broken] for such a loss. Where are you now when I need you the most?

SupremeDreamer 7-Apr-15/5:53 PM
Cliché, yeah, near pimple status? Oh... none of us want to know what parody i'd make of this... too fuckin easy, aye. Do you wish me to judge thy heart,
or thy ART? This poem.. I give a four, so that thy heart might not sour. :)




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