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"She Phoned This Morning" (Free verse) by ARTIE

As I woke on berth of linen in gray, jubilant charmed voice did herald my way. A vision remembered of soft curves displayed from which spoke the voice of an Angel, now not far away. Oh, how my soul doth yearn, for this sight and sound on each new day.

ARTIE 2-Sep-14/4:49 PM
Thanks and it was an irony; to love lost and a love to gain.
I waffled between "did herald my way" and "did herald my day" but I think the past/present tenses would've worked in either case.




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