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Kill Criminals In The Name Of JESUS! (Lyric) by Sing4Jesus!

We need to carry arms It is our sacred right! We need to protect our families From the evils of the night! So make God's bullets your own Let Jesus guide your gun! Shoot to kill all Evil With the help of His only Son! Never stand for intruders Stomping round your lands! Keep your shotgun or your rifle Firmly in your hands! So make God's bullets your own And fire them if you must! We live in freedom's own home And in God alone we trust!

nentwined 10-Mar-13/9:58 PM
I'd call it satire of some middling order. On its own merits, it's middling; satire elevates it a touch, but only a touch...and rated within satire's bounds, it's still just middling at best.

Not to say I didn't enjoy bits of it, presuming satire. But still....




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