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tree in a flood (Free verse) by Skamper

I feel your caresses tender wet kisses warm yet blown cool by your presence sending tingles with rivulets of moisture down me I am alive awake intensifying I bend stretching to accommodate your demands I am peaking fullfilled youre rushing past me – around me through me relentless I have no hope no ambition of ownership I am satisfied saturated yet – your hunger magnifies breaking little pieces from me carresses and kisses become lashings and torrents you are raging I am subdued swayings and rustlings are now thrashings prostrate upon you and within you anchored only by time I give over all that I am

Skamper 18-Feb-11/2:51 PM
too quick and too flabby, hmmm something to ponder over. Thanks guys




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