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Farewell, Kind Lover (Free verse) by Dovina

You depart as thunderstorm having cracked and boomed overhead and underground carried off by cool breath of God You awaken seeds tender, brave sprouts feeling the sky for twist of updraft overshadow of cloud

Dovina 1-Feb-10/4:33 PM
Sure I can.
You depart asa thunderstorm
having acracked and aboomed over a head and under a ground acarried off
by cool breath of a God
You waken seeds
tender, brave sprouts
feeling the sky for a twist of a updraft
overshadow of acloud
happy to ablige




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