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Farewell, Kind Lover (Free verse) by Dovina

You depart as thunderstorm having cracked and boomed overhead and underground carried off by cool breath of God You awaken seeds tender, brave sprouts feeling the sky for twist of updraft overshadow of cloud

half.italian 24-Jan-10/8:53 PM
Can you please fix this a bit for me. Just add some "a"s. I love it.




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