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angelic (Free verse) by deafmute2000

present yourself girl you know your beautiful you are craved by those who are hopeful for your approval. what brings you out of the ordinary? or are you just stuck in neutral in the middle of a cirlce formed by those who seek your approval cause they know your beautiful. so lady luck to those who pursue this angel and felicitations to you you will remain loyal. true to yourself yet another reason for us to gratify ourselves. cause you are envy when were empty im empty im ugly just a mirror to your beauty.

Amelia 18-Sep-02/5:23 PM
Belittling and sweet at the same time. What usually makes me decrease marks is the wrong/non usage of apostrophe. E.g. you're not your and we're not were.




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