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1 of 2,543 things she does that starts fires in your grassland heart. (Free verse) by mogwai

You wake up next to her and you wonder how the world ever got this far. She turns to you and ungums her lips before asking "What was I wearing last night?" This isn't what you expected her to say but that's exactly why you're there. You go through her wardrobe from the night before. She nods and smiles at each correct item. Your remember everything except for the colour of her socks. So you take a punt on this and say "White?" She nods and smiles. Then you say "Why did you ask me that?" She says, "I just wanted to make sure you were paying attention."

Christof 18-Sep-02/7:36 AM
It is a great suggestive title and maybe it would be nice to see it taken up in the poem itself, but I still like the scene that's presented here.




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