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prove me wrong (Free verse) by nentwined

As you grow up, you will lose: your innocence to the world-- your dreams, one by one; your certainty. As you grow old, you will lose: your poise and your strength-- the last of your dreams, your dignity. The things that you'll keep 'til death do you part: your fears and your habits, and perfidy.

Bill Z Bub 5-Mar-09/10:34 PM
ah the eternal struggle for being "in shape"... I've been losing weight lately, mainly due to a medically necessitated complete overhaul of my dietary regimen. And stress has started making me eat less, instead of what it used to do, make me eat more.

I should probably start going to this thing they call "gym".

Oh I posted the prose pome. Let me know what you think, I may not leave it up for long... we'll see.




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