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9 Things to Eat for Breakfast & Why (Free verse) by A. Nomaly

K.F.C. and diet coke- smelling salts of distribution, laced on and curled, on impact backwards through chemicality and pleasure and absolutism, following, pairing nothing- pleasure in during, twisting of lid, pouring, blinking avocado salad with garlic- puke in ganglia, vapors, pork intestines meth, crystal- perfect destruction, raunchy best with porn bounce, my love 5lbs black licorice- four sticks a day, medicine for stomach ice cream- pregnant dreamy cake, freezer open, frost lined delight in queen car fumes- nylon head scarf, BMW, back muscles release into hand grip hate- parenthetical kisses- induction

nentwined 5-Mar-09/10:08 PM
Personal, shmersonal--come on, we'll rip it a new one ;)

But I like what you're doing. :)




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