poemranker ::Replying

ReplyTo a comment on the only thing worse than living (revised, liberated) by Bill Z Bub.

nentwined5 Mar 2009

I think the shift at the last is kind of necessary for where it's aiming, but agree it misses the mark.

Overall the thing's too random for me, but it has some good stuff going on.

Still, why the weird spacing? Am I missing something, or is that just how you were "grooving" at the time?