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night owl (5) (Senryu) by elementalidad

family asleep in separate rooms peace at last

Ranger 6-Oct-08/4:53 PM
I know more or less nothing about Japanese poetry, but this is a shining example of how good simplicity can be in poetry. Your others try to be a bit too poetic, whereas this makes the reader do all the work without realising it. Top drawer.




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