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Bottled Wisdom (Free verse) by Bethy

Found a note in side a bottle. I did. Over yonder I skipped, under a tree, I hid. Found a twig, stirred it 'round. Not retrieved. Not relieved. I heaved. Ahhh! Broke the bottle,read the note... To whom it may concern, Tis' a lesson you must learn, to free yourself of doubt, never fish in a leaky boat. Found a bottle, put in note, threw it out.

Bethy 29-Sep-08/10:35 AM
Thank you for your kind words Drummah.




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