Replying to a comment on:

Mountain Fever (Free verse) by Celticai

The wind sends its breath Across my body – my mind – my soul Standing amidst these mountains of time I’m sensitized Energized… Joyous to be alive, wild, and free. My heartbeat accelerates Skin flushes with rosy tones of ardour I tremble and shiver in responsive anticipation. To be at one with the earth spirit that swirls around me Surrounded yet alone Selfish but compliant Finding the summit wondrously. I am on top of the world – a perfect moment in time.

Bethy 29-Sep-08/10:27 AM
perfect! I don't know what to say...I feel like I am sitting on a mountain in Peru. Thank you




Track and Plan your submissions ; Read some Comics ; Get Paid for your Poetry
PoemRanker Copyright © 2001 - 2024 - kaolin fire - All Rights Reserved
All poems Copyright © their respective authors
An internet tradition since June 9, 2001