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:: snowsounds (Haiku) by elementalidad

owl greets the snowfall silent night and wide awake fieldmouse heeds the tune

Dovina 6-Sep-08/6:34 AM
not bad, just that the harness of 575, like corsets, is too restricting and unnecessary even in haiku and church.




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