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Time to leap (Free verse) by hobojo

As I lay I drift and remember currents flowing the sounds heard of nature unwound and emotions sour melting smiles glances, caught in memory forever created together and yet so far musical attempts imagined or so real? do I only see what I want to be there? And this is my time to shed habits to grow just jump from the cliff do not fear what lies below just me alone but better than an unwanted place better to wait for that place its possible I'll never reach the destination planned but settle no more you dam fool do not look back so far have you come be proud keep going leap!

hobojo 6-Sep-08/1:02 AM
Thank you - I agree with everything you recommended




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