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Cinematic Indulgence (Free verse) by nentwined

Five miles of desert, prepped carefully, swept, kept smooth and "Hollywood"; clouds seeded by the very best for a two hour, one-take, no-cut down-pour of action packed walking amidst the rain; plot to be ret-conned in, explained by fans. Failure will be lemonade; drunk deeply with a twist of gin: sabotage could very well make the film.

Ranger 21-Jul-08/3:10 AM
How quickly can you recite this?

I love the skipping beat. It gives the poem a sort of it-might-be-meaningful-but-who-cares feel, almost childish. Makes me think you're the sort of person who says "dah-ling" to everyone you meet.




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