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dps (Free verse) by decadentlaurel

i look at her she is reading i look still she looks i see the ground carpe diem i remember oh captain, my captain thoughts from the back of my head will i look again will our eyes meet will my heart flutter never to try never to jump never to fly waiting before me sits such beauty still all i see is the ground

decadentlaurel 16-Sep-02/11:53 PM
ok.. hrmm. i think it went something like
yeah i changed this one and wanted to leave it alone because i didn't want to lose the original.

will i look again
will our eyes meet
will my heart flutter
never...
never...
never...





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