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On Youth Revisited (Free verse) by vulcan

A breeze comes and goes festively, I wash my face And water, splash! My new face is like a rainbow After a grim shower. Now, methinks I'm younger than before... Behind me is a Door That opens I know Into a chaos Of Nightingales and flow'rs.

Dan garcia-Black 26-Apr-08/12:23 AM
My new face is...younger than before...a chaos
Of Nightingales and flow'rs.
Yeah. Works for me.




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