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Light show (Free verse) by winniss

To the light, the people go. Masquerading for a show. Turn the light out, watch them go. Back to people they don't know.

Dark Angle 12-Mar-08/1:22 AM
there could be something good here, maybe a couple more stanzas would help to flush it out.




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