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Trust (Free verse) by hobojo

We slipped into sadness We both spiraled down We were in over our heads We both nearly drown I tried hard to climb out For so long I have grown And now look down with sadness To see you alone You reach for my hand Expecting my love "I am so sorry" I say as I look from above I tried to work with you I tried to assist Why didn't you let me Why did you resist

Edna Sweetlove 25-Feb-08/6:33 PM
This is a passable poem. I think you should post it at another website I sometimes go to: http://poetryaddicts.pcriot.com/forum/ - it would be much loved there as indeed would you.....




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