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Addendum to Engine Braking BY INTRANSIT (Free verse) by sliver

Then the air brakes Staining to hold the load As the curve looms Insidious asphalt Dying to kill Hot brakes Nothing but a jake Standing between me and death Until salvation arises A sign Runaway ramp ahead Fuck it The alternative is death

INTRANSIT 23-Dec-07/10:45 AM
Been busy lately, couldn't get round to the ranker.

Obviously not the way I was going, (though I did miss my mark ) there's potential here.

Drop- Then the, as the, hot brakes, until, a sign, fuck it.

condense the jake line and the following line. Make jake a capital OR a corporation.




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