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Suicide Note(I Blame You) (Free verse) by alvinb

Thus the water flows And so my blood goes For as the wind blows Like my love, lost So there goes My blood flows Streaming to those What I lost Bye, bye Darkened sky I see myself So up high I guess its goodbye Wipe my tears, let them dry Because you made me cry Now I’m flying to the sky

x0lovelylarnx0 20-Dec-07/2:17 PM
For one thing i'm not a man! And I wasn't getting biblical. It's common sense that people who commit suicide don't go to heaven, and i didn't mention the bible! But i'm glad you agree that people who commit suicide don't go to heaven!




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