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Suicide Note(I Blame You) (Free verse) by alvinb

Thus the water flows And so my blood goes For as the wind blows Like my love, lost So there goes My blood flows Streaming to those What I lost Bye, bye Darkened sky I see myself So up high I guess its goodbye Wipe my tears, let them dry Because you made me cry Now I’m flying to the sky

LynnJR 14-Dec-07/11:18 AM
wonderful poem, very deep, very wounded and dark, displayed the resolution of giving up giving in, the final breath. I t flowed very well however the third stanza iwould swith the third and last line to keep with your rhyme scheme. - lovely work




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