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In the berth (Free verse) by INTRANSIT

Some nights the warm reaching wind rocks my truck hushshshshsh hushshshshsh Sometimes a train passes beating its' open boxcar song. blumblum blumblum blumblum blumblum Some nights I lie in the plushness of the contented cat underneath the hood. And in the just right sleeping weather I leave my curtains open and look up.

Dental Panic 29-Nov-07/5:57 AM
the sound effects make it an infant thing - don't know if that's intentional. It's wasted on me, that's for sure.
I like the cat though. prrrr prrrrrrrrrrr





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