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Missing - You (Free verse) by Skamper

a little out of breath a little far from sane closer to the stage farther from the rain a quiet corner weeps a quiet whisper sighs closer to the grave farther from the lies a secret life is lived a secret smile is asked farther from the play closer to the act in dimming of the lights in closing of the door your shadow will remain I always wanted more

Skamper 29-Nov-07/3:20 AM
Iv'e been messing about with this one Dovina, to get the last stanza working as I see it, to no avail. I might leave it for a bit and see if anything shows up later. The rain/sane has bearing though - we are both a little unstable and we met in the rain...ah! so romantic, a couple of soggy fruit loops :)




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