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Missing - You (Free verse) by Skamper

a little out of breath a little far from sane closer to the stage farther from the rain a quiet corner weeps a quiet whisper sighs closer to the grave farther from the lies a secret life is lived a secret smile is asked farther from the play closer to the act in dimming of the lights in closing of the door your shadow will remain I always wanted more

Skamper 26-Nov-07/10:37 PM
ah! that's because you would need to look at typo.com

no matter how many times you read and re-read to make sure its all OK, sometimes a typo so obvious just fails to be noticed. Must be the mind telling the eye it's wrong...many thanks.




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