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The Dung Beetles (Free verse) by Pappa

The dung beetles; they settle, they sit 'til spring at last dawns and warms day; adults appear from pupae.

Skamper 26-Nov-07/5:45 PM
this is too complicated for me - the structure I can't even begin to appreciate, but the lesson in nature could do with something...not sure what that could be but the last line seems text bookish, rather than poetic...

can you show me where i might find other Englyn?




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