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The Taking (Free verse) by Skamper

I Said No i said no then I Quivered

INTRANSIT 20-Nov-07/10:28 AM
Hmm. I guess that's me wanting a little more "fight".

Re: then, that's why I suggested leaving the gap, but, the ... is unnecessary.




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