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Some poems (Other) by INTRANSIT

Some poems get stuck in the fallopian tubes. Some spend their entire lives in the I.C.U. But some, very few, slide right on out and through their swaddling cloth grab the 'scope, assert: "Hiya Doc ! How are you ?" Snap the nurse on her wazoo and declare: "See ya suckers! I'm off to the Louvre"

sliver 12-Nov-07/6:00 PM
Well done INTRANSIT, Well done. I can certainly relate to the I.C.U. part. Another well deserved ten for you. I haven't been around for a while but if time permits I'll read a few more of yours.




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