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Some poems get stuck in the fallopian tubes. Some spend their entire lives in the I.C.U. But some, very few, slide right on out and through their swaddling cloth grab the 'scope, assert: "Hiya Doc ! How are you ?" Snap the nurse on her wazoo and declare: "See ya suckers! I'm off to the Louvre"

Paul S 11-Nov-07/2:20 AM
This is good INTRANSIT. Something any good writer should be able to relate to. The rhythm seems fine to me. Nice work.




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