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Stroke It! (Free verse) by Skamper

I want to brush sweetly dabble madly create something Astounding! I want to be EVERYTHING So - bards shall sing me angels weep blood for me I want the world to know I'm secretly Van Gogh disguised as picasso

Skamper 8-Nov-07/2:35 AM
LOL...ok..changed could to shall - although not quite what I had in mind either, but it's better, no need to give those bards a choice huh? I want them compelled to sing, although that's not the right word for this either...hmmm

Words like 'want' and 'everything' give this exactly what I needed, an ego boost...a demand...a spoiltness...an impulse to let loose an ambition...a little dream




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