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While waiting for someone to check in my cars (Free verse) by INTRANSIT

A mother passes me son on hip, and six feet behind her in denim jacket and blue beret, her daughter. Carried by a single white balloon high overhead. Teddy bear in arm.

INTRANSIT 23-Oct-07/1:20 PM
That is a very good analysis, Ranger. I'm reading Pinsky's- the sounds of poetry and trying to grasp the concept of tension and release in a poem. Pinsky references apoem by W.C. Williams where a woman "gives herself" to eating a plum. Yes, sounds. Perhaps I'm not getting enough work out of that balloon, either. Appreciate the read. Thanks.




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