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The American Soldier (Sonnet) by x0lovelylarnx0

A soldier goes off to war He hopes he's coming back He sits and waits for more On his way out he carries a sack Hopes he never has to see a friend die He preys to God he won't have to fire He can't sleep or lie He listens to every command from his sire Thank god for all our troops They are giving up months of their life When they could be shooting hoops Instead they signed up for a fight He gets off his boat When he saw his family he found hope

x0lovelylarnx0 21-Oct-07/12:29 PM
I do know what they are doing! They are serving our country, and risking their lives! Once again this is a very old poem of mine, and who said that I was talking about the war going on now!




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