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The Friendship Storm (Free verse) by x0lovelylarnx0

On with life our friends will go Embarking on a new road Fluffy White Storm clouds cluster in the sky Blocking the sun from shining down on their lives Love hides in the dark rain The Lovers remain separate as the storm reigns Lighting Shatters the heart in half Thunder thrashes out on it's soul mate The storm blows over Leaving in a rush to tear another lost heart into shreds The sun pours it's love and warmth onto the Victim's wretched luck The paths connect back at the start Now these lovers must never part

sonawrote 19-Oct-07/11:28 AM
despite the ongoing comments by other people, I liked this it even made me go read more of your stuff....




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