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While waiting for someone to check in my cars
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A mother passes me son on hip, and six feet behind her in denim jacket and blue beret, her daughter. Carried by a single white balloon high overhead. Teddy bear in arm.
x0lovelylarnx0
16-Oct-07/3:07 PM
The poems gives a good vision of the mother and her children.
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