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This Is Me (Free verse) by PoeticXTC

This is me, I`m one of a kind. Brown, chinky eyes not easy to define. Shoulder length hair dark-brown and blonde Soft lips that speak truth; my word is bond. Beauty, smooth skin touched by none. A bright smile that could melt the sun. Sexy, tight frame not to be mistakened This gift is made for one, others are foresakened. Ivory key like teeth in two straight rows strong, neat from a slight correction Legs, muscular, like track stars Body, Built to perfection. Strong, working hands, worked to the bone. Pencil thin fingers most prized possession owned. Soft, cushy, tushy never missed by eyes. Surrounded by thick, ham like thighs. Never can be broken, standing tall and strong They envy such definition, seems nothing`s wrong Everyones view from the outside in Wanting what they don`t have, Forgetting envy is sin.

PoeticXTC 9-Oct-07/11:47 PM
Poetry is freedom of expression. FREEDOM OF EXPRESS. Using metaphorical terms and images are for a play on words. I wasn't intending on playing w/ my words.. Its a discriptive poem. It has double meaning to it. Try to read b/w the lines next time. If you want metaphors read other poems i've written or write and read your own.




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