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This Is Me (Free verse) by PoeticXTC

This is me, I`m one of a kind. Brown, chinky eyes not easy to define. Shoulder length hair dark-brown and blonde Soft lips that speak truth; my word is bond. Beauty, smooth skin touched by none. A bright smile that could melt the sun. Sexy, tight frame not to be mistakened This gift is made for one, others are foresakened. Ivory key like teeth in two straight rows strong, neat from a slight correction Legs, muscular, like track stars Body, Built to perfection. Strong, working hands, worked to the bone. Pencil thin fingers most prized possession owned. Soft, cushy, tushy never missed by eyes. Surrounded by thick, ham like thighs. Never can be broken, standing tall and strong They envy such definition, seems nothing`s wrong Everyones view from the outside in Wanting what they don`t have, Forgetting envy is sin.

PoeticXTC 9-Oct-07/11:37 PM
my main point in this poem isn't just my physical appearance., nor is it an ego issue.. It's what people perceive of me. I am physically all these things but that's only what is seen. When in reality there is more to me then just a pretty face and nice body... maybe if you all weren't so narrow-minded you would have caught that in the last couple of lines. My peotic style will not be yours; neither will my personality be governed by your opinions of me.




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